How toppers approached this question
Q.17) The rationale behind the MSP system is well acknowledged, but it requires comprehensive reforms to mitigate the unintended consequences on the market and environment. Analyse.
How toppers built answers of this type: the structure spine and the moves they converged on. Aggregated across real past-paper answers for this paper and directive, not this one question, so no question-specific evidence is shown. No answer text is reproduced.
The topper method
Analyse
The spine toppers built
Open
- Context-hook opening
- Define the key term first
Build
- Numbered enumeration
- Problems then remedies
- Directive-mirroring headers
Close
- Verdict conclusion
- Forward-looking close
Moves they converged on
- Numbered enumeration69% of answers
Enumerate points as a numbered list.
- Example as evidence61% of answers
Tag a concrete example explicitly as evidence.
- Problems then remedies61% of answers
Pair each problem with a remedy.
- Directive-mirroring headers56% of answers
Headers that mirror the question's directive.
- Data as argument54% of answers
Use a figure to carry the argument, not decorate it.
Evidence toppers carried (per answer)
Current events ~1Examples ~1Institutions ~1Concepts ~1Statutes ~1Other anchors ~1Data points ~1
GS3 · Analyse: derived from 70 real past-paper answers: counts, not copied prose
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