How toppers approached this question
Coral reefs are considered to be at the epicentre of marine ecology; however, their existence is threatened due to a plethora of anthropogenic and natural causes. Comment.
How toppers built answers of this type: the structure spine and the moves they converged on. Aggregated across real past-paper answers for this paper and directive, not this one question, so no question-specific evidence is shown. No answer text is reproduced.
The topper method
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The spine toppers built
Open
- Context-hook opening
- Define the key term first
Build
- Numbered enumeration
- Problems then remedies
- Directive-mirroring headers
Close
- Verdict conclusion
- Forward-looking close
Moves they converged on
- Numbered enumeration67% of answers
Enumerate points as a numbered list.
- Data as argument60% of answers
Use a figure to carry the argument, not decorate it.
- Context-hook opening57% of answers
Open with a hook that frames the issue.
- Example as evidence52% of answers
Tag a concrete example explicitly as evidence.
- Problems then remedies52% of answers
Pair each problem with a remedy.
Evidence toppers carried (per answer)
Other anchors ~1Current events ~1Examples ~1Data points ~1Institutions ~1Statutes ~1
GS3 · Comment: derived from 42 real past-paper answers: counts, not copied prose
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