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4. (a) Emotional Intelligence is an essential ingredient for successful implementation of pandemic induced emergency response. Comment in the light of COVID-19 pandemic.

How toppers built answers of this type: the structure spine and the moves they converged on. Aggregated across real past-paper answers for this paper and directive, not this one question, so no question-specific evidence is shown. No answer text is reproduced.

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The spine toppers built

  1. Open

    • Define the key term first
    • Context-hook opening
  2. Build

    • Numbered enumeration
    • Both sides before the verdict
    • Directive-mirroring headers
  3. Close

    • Verdict conclusion
    • Forward-looking close

constructionMoves they converged on

  • Example as evidence67% of answers

    Tag a concrete example explicitly as evidence.

  • Numbered enumeration61% of answers

    Enumerate points as a numbered list.

  • Verdict conclusion59% of answers

    End with a clear verdict.

  • Define the key term first56% of answers

    Open by defining the central term.

  • Both sides before the verdict49% of answers

    Weigh both sides before taking a stand.

  • Context-hook opening33% of answers

    Open with a hook that frames the issue.

  • Directive-mirroring headers33% of answers

    Headers that mirror the question's directive.

  • ‘However’ pivot31% of answers

    Pivot to nuance with a qualifier.

stairsEvidence toppers carried (per answer)

Concepts ~1Thinkers ~1Examples ~1Other anchors ~1Current events ~1

account_treeCase anatomy · Emotional intelligence

  • Ethical issues90% of toppers
  • Justification82% of toppers
  • Values in conflict80% of toppers
  • Options80% of toppers
  • Stakeholders78% of toppers
  • Chosen option78% of toppers
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