How toppers approached this question
1. (b) "People's indifference is the best breeding ground for corruption to grow". Comment.
How toppers built answers of this type: the structure spine and the moves they converged on. Aggregated across real past-paper answers for this paper and directive, not this one question, so no question-specific evidence is shown. No answer text is reproduced.
The topper method
Comment
The spine toppers built
Open
- Define the key term first
- Context-hook opening
Build
- Numbered enumeration
- Both sides before the verdict
- Directive-mirroring headers
Close
- Verdict conclusion
- Forward-looking close
Moves they converged on
- Example as evidence67% of answers
Tag a concrete example explicitly as evidence.
- Numbered enumeration61% of answers
Enumerate points as a numbered list.
- Verdict conclusion59% of answers
End with a clear verdict.
- Define the key term first56% of answers
Open by defining the central term.
- Both sides before the verdict49% of answers
Weigh both sides before taking a stand.
Evidence toppers carried (per answer)
Concepts ~1Thinkers ~1Examples ~1Other anchors ~1Current events ~1
Case anatomy · Corruption
- Ethical issues96% of toppers
- Chosen option94% of toppers
- Justification89% of toppers
- Options70% of toppers
- Stakeholders64% of toppers
- Values in conflict62% of toppers
GS4 · Comment: derived from 61 real past-paper answers: counts, not copied prose
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